GreenArrow74's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beneath your feet]

Nice game! I love creepypastas, and this one was delicious!

DruidCZ responds:

Thanky you for playing! :D I am really glad you enjoyed my game :) . . . If you have some free time, you can rate it on gamejolt too ;) (but only if you want, link is in description)

[Space Expedition]

WOW! Really nice!
The story is wonderfully told, and the gameplay is challenging, yet not too difficult!
An excellent work, indeed!

A5Pic responds:

thx bro!

[Ventures Of ♛Cyberdevil]

Well, the basic idea is ok, but you have to check out the game controls, as they're frustrating at times.

DIWAKAR responds:

Ooooooooooooops

[Aurorae]

Non Bad, but you should improve game controls.
Jumping AND moving sometimes proves itself uncomfortable

semaphor responds:

Update improves on this: See update 2 in description.

[Coping]

I'm not that impressed.

Premising the game is "obviously an interactive art piece" is not sufficient to bypass (IMHO) its total lack of game involvement.

I think there are better and more suitable ways to express one's ideas about loss, grieving and mourning.

A game has to primarily be a game. It may tell an interesting story, but the story has develop through a convincing gameplay.

Sorry, but I didn't like it.

RaveRadbury responds:

There is a well-known thought experiment by the philosopher Wittgenstein in which he tries to find a common concept that all games share. After pursuing many avenues of thought and finding that there are always exceptions, he comes to the conclusion that games are not so much things that all share one common trait so much as they are a family of similar things grouped around but not requiring any number of traits.

Therefore, while I respect your response to the game, especially in that it did not contain the "convincing gameplay" that you seem to highly value, I aggressively reject your disqualification of my game's worth (especially in its themes and delivery). It's unfortunate that you did not like it, but there are hundreds of games that do not develop stories through convincing gameplay (most giving an initial premise either through an intro screen or an instruction manual), and I see no valid reason why mine must be deemed underwhelming for it.

Thank you for your feedback.

[The Talisman of Kings]

I do really like its simplicity and the basic idea.

It was a wise choice to keep the texts short, but I suggest you to adopt a more imaginative writing style.

Please be careful of typos (for example: "rogue" and not "rouge").

In the overall a nice try!

mark9135 responds:

thank you for your suggestions, i will remember them.